In this third posting, let me tell you about my favorite thing. I’m so sure that all of you have a favorite thing. Whatever it is, exactly you love it. My favorite thing is my newest shoes. Let me tell you a little information about my newest shoes.
I have been having these shoes since January 2010. I bought it at Salatiga when I had my holiday. It was so surprising that there are many delighted-looking shoes with cheap price at a store in Salatiga. So, I bought one of it.
My newest shoes have well-known brand. I’m certain that all of you know “Nike”. Yes, that’s my newest shoes’ brand. Major color of it is black, but the bottom side of it has white color. The brand of my shoes is located on right and left side of it and the brand is red-colored. Can you imagine it?
The price of my shoes is just about 150.000 rupiahs. It’s cheap isn’t it? However, my shoes aren’t seen as cheap as it price. It looks more expensive than it is because “Nike” brand is attached on it.
I really love to wear it. It is so comfortable to wear. I used to wear it when I go to study at my college or when I have my Saturday night with my girl friend. I love to wear it because it makes me feel more confident and cooler than before.
I think that’s all about my newest shoes. If you want to have one, please ask me and I’ll accompany you to buy it at Salatiga. Hhahaha.. Thank’s for reading..
I have been having these shoes since January 2010. I bought it at Salatiga when I had my holiday. It was so surprising that there are many delighted-looking shoes with cheap price at a store in Salatiga. So, I bought one of it.
My newest shoes have well-known brand. I’m certain that all of you know “Nike”. Yes, that’s my newest shoes’ brand. Major color of it is black, but the bottom side of it has white color. The brand of my shoes is located on right and left side of it and the brand is red-colored. Can you imagine it?
The price of my shoes is just about 150.000 rupiahs. It’s cheap isn’t it? However, my shoes aren’t seen as cheap as it price. It looks more expensive than it is because “Nike” brand is attached on it.
I really love to wear it. It is so comfortable to wear. I used to wear it when I go to study at my college or when I have my Saturday night with my girl friend. I love to wear it because it makes me feel more confident and cooler than before.
I think that’s all about my newest shoes. If you want to have one, please ask me and I’ll accompany you to buy it at Salatiga. Hhahaha.. Thank’s for reading..
Paskalis | On: 17 Februari 2010 pukul 06.19
hey jerk, "My newest shoes have well-known brand", do you get my point? actually you can substitute word 'shoes' with 'sneaker', you don't need to write all of them in one compound noun :D
yet, it's a masterpiece ahaha
Hendrika's paragraph writing | On: 17 Februari 2010 pukul 06.55
hahaha you'd told me about your sneakers...
Dii's blog | On: 17 Februari 2010 pukul 20.05
Thank's bob!!
I'll revise it later..
Lucia Nino Widiasmoro Dewati | On: 17 Februari 2010 pukul 20.11
Hahahaha. . . .
Sneaker huh??
I think, You've already told it to anyone. . . .hahahhaaaa~~
~~idhem~~ with kalis~~
hahahaaaa. .However, It's a nice post dude!!
Keep Writing. .
See u soon~~
gregorius in paragraph writing | On: 17 Februari 2010 pukul 20.16
it must be a pair of nice shoes.
hmm, you must pay attention for the preposition on this sentence:"I have been having these shoes at January 2010. I think it will be better if you change the preposition at with since.
you also have to pay attention much on punctuation. After so i think you must have a comma. and so on.
what's the meaning of sneaker-modeled shoes? hehe, i can't understand it.
yeah, that's a nice post. anyway, one day you may buy it for me.hehe
Nickolas | On: 17 Februari 2010 pukul 20.23
Just take care of your sneaker, dude..!! :)
Glad to read your post..
perhaps you can refise it later..
Mutiara | On: 17 Februari 2010 pukul 20.59
I have been having these shoes at January 2010.
I'm not sure that it should be Present Perfect Progressive. hehehe
Soniiia | On: 18 Februari 2010 pukul 19.15
salatiga? ? ? ?
is it near with ambarawa? ? ?
or other salatiga? ? ?
hahahha. . . . :D
nice posting :D